LMJT

For this week's 'Four' challenge. 

For this week's extension of a flash challenge. This is an extra 280 words on my 'Rotten Apples' story from last week. Thanks, Liam 

For the 300 word challenge I set this week on 'All This Time'. Just thought I’d have a go to get myself back in the rhythm. 

For this week's photo prompt challenge. I chose the first picture. Not sure this is 'horror' though. 

For this week's 500 words on 'in the old manor/manner' challenge. 

For this week's family get together challenge to include a strong smell, vegetable, something sharp and piece of crystal. Thanks for the challenge. 

For the challenge I set this week - any theme so long as the setting is a kitchen. Any comments welcome. 

For this week's 10 minute character sketch. 

For this week's 'based on reality' challenge. Not written a flash for ages, so this was a great prompt. Thanks Oonah. 

For the challenge I set this week, 500 words to include 'cat/s', 'balloon' and 'birthday.' 

For this week's 300 word 'Late' challenge. All comments welcome. Thanks in advance. Liam 

For this week's 'Nothing to Lose', 500 words to include 'revelation' challenge. Bit bleak. Liam 

For this week's challenge to include, 'What do you think would happen if...' 

For this week's 'heat of the sun' challenge. :) 

For this week's old/new/borrowed/blue challenge. Thanks for reading. 

For this week's challenge. Thanks, Liam 

For this week's 'discovery' challenge. Thanks for reading. Liam 

Hello everyone, this is my entry for the week 374 challenge. Apologies I've not been around for a while. Looking forward ot reading your work. Thanks, Liam 

For this week's 'mad, bad and dangerous to know' challenge. Thanks in advance for reading. Liam 

This is a scene early on in my novel in which Daniel, the MC, bumps into his colleague and acquintance Jane in town. Just for clarification if anyone's reading this for the first time, Daniel's gay but not out to anyone. Oh, and I've changed from first to third person. Any thoughts? 

Hello everyone, this is a scene that I wrote today as part of my NaNoWriMo. It's very rough and I'd value any input. Since finding out that his son is in prison, Daniel has written one letter to which he's had no reply. This is his second. I guess the main thing I want to know is if it feels natural or not. Thanks in advance. :) 

This scene follows on from Daniel's seeing his son Christopher's picture in the paper. It's a little longer than it should be in terms of word count, so sorry about that. But I hope you can stick with it. Thanks in advance. 

Hi everyone, this is the third chapter of my novel. I've kind of rearranged the order a bit, so this may not come after the last excerpt I uploaded. I'm so sorry it's late being uploaded, and completely understand if you don't have time to read the whole piece. A chapter before, Daniel found out that his estranged son of fifteen years was in prison. 

Hello. This second chapter shows how Daniel and Samantha met. It's long, so for those in Novel II, I'll be leaving this up for four weeks. Really, I'd like to know if thier meeting is believable and if the dialogue works well. Thanks in advance for your comments. 

Hi everyone, this is what will probably be the second chapter of my novel. The newspaper story is the one about Daniel's seen about his son, Christopher, earlier in the day. I'm interested to see if it reads authentically and how the rest of the narrative progresses. Thanks in advance for any comments. 

Can't remember if I've already uploaded a version of this scene, but it's changed a little if I have! This comes after Daniel has seen that his estranged son of fifteen years is in prison for GBH. Really, I'd like to know what works and what doesn't. I want to flesh Daniel's character out after the opening scenes so that readers can empathise with him. Thoughts? 

Hi everyone, sorry I'm late uploading. And sorry for not commenting or uploading last time around. Things have been a bit manic. Anyway, I'm working on my characters at the moment and this piece came from a prompt in a book I have. I guess I'd like to know how it reads. I'm not sure where it would fit in the novel, so perhaps a bit of guidance on that front would be useful! Or perhaps that's a bit much to ask. All comments gratefully received. Thanks. :) 

For Sheila's rivalry challenge. :) 

For this week's challenge. Thanks in advance for reading. 

For my challenge of 500 words to include a Chinese meal and rainy evening. :) 

For this week's Bed & Breakfast challenge. 

For this week's 'angel/devil' flash. Thanks! Liam 

For this week's 'neighbour' challenge. Sorry I'm late! Edit: I'm also over on the word count! Whoops! 

For this week's travel themed flash. 

For the challenge I set this week of 500 words on 'Long Distance'. I know it's my challenge, but I needed a break from NaNoWriMo! Liam :) 

This is the first scene of my novel in progress, currently titled Keeping You A Secret. It's about the fifth draft of the start of the novel. It's a first draft at the moment, but I'd like to know if you think it's engaging and strong enough to demand interest. Thanks. 

This is a rough draft of my second chapter. The first chapter sees Daniel receive notification about the death of an old teacher. He reacts very strangely. We also learn that Samantha is pregnant. 

In the last scene, Daniel and Samantha met Daniel's old 'friend' from school, Anthony Gray, who we understand makes Daniel very uncomfortable. Ever sociable, Samantha asked Anthony to dinner along with their other friends, Tom and Janine. 

This continues from the last piece I uploaded. Daniel and Samantha are talking with Anthony Gray, an old 'friend' from Daniel's school. I'm aware it's dialogue heavy at the moment and am open to all comments. Thanks in advance. 

This follows on from the funeral scene. Samantha comes back from the washroom to find Daniel talking to an old school friend. 

For this week's Flash Fiction II 'Stars' challenge. A little tangential, but they're in there! 

For this week's challenge. 

For this week's Messerschmitt, bike, doll, summer theme challenge. 

For this week's FF II monotony/football challenge. 

For the challenge I set this week on 'music in the background.' I'm such an idiot! I started writing this and completely forgot about the theme I'd set! 

For my challenge, 500 words on, 'On the other side of the closed door'.  

For this week's 'Change of Scenery' challenge. Thanks! 

For this week's 'Nighthawks' challenge. 

For this week's Technology challenge 

For this week's 'speed' challenge. :) 

Hello. This is my piece in response to Oonah's 'Out of Time' flash challenge. Any comments gratefully received. Thanks in advance. Liam 

For this week's challenge of 500 words to use: icecube, TV producer, the box, lottery ticket. Thanks for reading. 

For this week's 'Collector' challenge. Thanks in advance for reading. 

For this week's dialogue challenge. Liam :) 

For this week's 'the raven' and 'narrow passageway' challenge. 

Hello all, I've not been around for a while, so apologies for that. Hope you're all well. This is my entry for the resurrection challenge. Thanks. 

For this week's 'rotten apples' theme. :) 

For this week's Imagined Paintings challenge. Not sure it's quite on brief, but I enjoyed writing it! Any feedback welcomed. 

For this week's Vision challenge. 

For this week's strain challenge. Hope you're feeling better Frances! 

For the week 333 challenge. 

For this week's song challenge. Apologies I've not been around so much recently. Looking forward to reading your pieces. Liam :) 

Sorry I'm late uploading for this week's challenge. Thanks in advance for reading. 

For the challenge I set this week of 'something to hold onto'. It's late in, but I assumed this wouldn't be an issue since it's a response to the challenge I set myself! :) 

Hi everyone, I hope you don't mind (again!) but I'm posting a short story this time. This is for the same competition as I posted the last one (Conflict, up to 2000 words). The deadline is February 14, and I know it's cheeky to ask, but if you could have a look at it before then I'd be most grateful. I'll be back in novel mode next time around, promise! Thanks in advance, Liam :) 

For this week's 800 word challenge. Be warned: Bit of a ropey, rushed ending! 

In response to the challenge I set to include mention of a cat/radio/jigsaw. 

For this week's 'knock on the door' challenge. 

For this week's challenge. Thanks. Liam 

Hi everyone, I hope you don't mind, but this time around I'm putting up a story that I'm going to enter for a short story competition. It has to be 2000 words on the theme of 'Conflict', so I've some room to pad stuff out. I wrote it in the week as a piece of flash, and I'm aware that the ending's a bit rushed, but would appreciate any comments. Thanks! :) 

For the flash fiction II challenge to include 'deep well' or 'deep in the well.' Thanks in advance for reading. Liam 

In response to this week's flash challenge - theme of Lost under 600 words. Any comments gratefully received. :) Liam 

For this week's 'wrong place' challenge. :)