Sam Rix

This is my first exploration into contemporary writing for women, in a novel titled ‘Body Play’. It’s an extract I am considering putting forward to a woman's magazine for feedback, but before I do, I'd appreciate your comments and advice people? Love and luck Sam  

An immature poem, about being targeted for the umpteenth time! 

A yarn about realisation of aging. A work in progress, needs a little tweeking. 

An attempt at the 3rd beginners exercise - childhood bed, It ran on to just over two hundred words ... I'll have a go at the alternative choice shortly. Sorry I've been off line this last week or so.. Sam 

From the book of The song’s of the Samurai This one is an odd one, another moody piece still needing work, which has a 'possible' brighter note in a second verse. But I think part two detracts from the atmosphere I’m trying to create. Thoughts please on the first part and I'll upload the second half later, just so as not to confuse the ‘two parts‘. Thanks Sam  

From the 'songs of the Samurai' titled 'Lone' Presently a work in progress. 

Another Short poem from my book of 'Songs of the Samurai' Your thoughts please everyone... 

I tend to write in an over blown way, so I set myself a task to write some flash fiction with a short scene and try to give a full image, as I've seen some of the crew do so well on WW. please indulge and give me your thoughts. Sam 

a cruel little number, I revisted after rushing to post it... Hope the changes work? 

The next instalment to entertain and to be reviewed by you lovely people. 

A hello to every one, I just joined the forum and have loaded this for others to mull over, please. Sam 

Prompted by two lovely ladies, I'm trying to portray the knights theme with a hint of role reversal - under construction so beware! 

A short piece for RLG9 

One I'm working on, which I'm not quite happy with yet, let's see what you all think? 

I struggled with this one, I wrote it originally as just the thoughts in the head of this rather sick bugger, but then re-read the task and saw the comment to 'sit the subject next to some one', which implied to me some kind of dialogue and had to revist it. sorry it broke the 400 barrier by a bit! 

from 'relationships' thoughts please me ol' lovies? 

A samurai at rest 

A first attempt at a synopsis for this peice, my first ever synopsis. I'm not sure if I've done enough on the characters, or if the route I'm taking is detracting from what I'm trying to achieve. Please comment on your thoughts. 

My first piece for the beginners board, I hope it isn't too off the wall? 

Another from my poem book 'The Songs of the Samurai' 

Here we go then, another from my book of poems: 'In love of my Children' One of my favourites, it hits me when I read it.  

Adrenaline’s companions in fight or flight. 

My two little boys playing in the snow  

The darker side of love's nature 

From the Songs of the Samurai. A spirit in dilemma, the hardest battle of them all...