Sam Rix

One I'm working on, which I'm not quite happy with yet, let's see what you all think? 

An immature poem, about being targeted for the umpteenth time! 

This is my first exploration into contemporary writing for women, in a novel titled ‘Body Play’. It’s an extract I am considering putting forward to a woman's magazine for feedback, but before I do, I'd appreciate your comments and advice people? Love and luck Sam  

An attempt at the 3rd beginners exercise - childhood bed, It ran on to just over two hundred words ... I'll have a go at the alternative choice shortly. Sorry I've been off line this last week or so.. Sam 

A first attempt at a synopsis for this peice, my first ever synopsis. I'm not sure if I've done enough on the characters, or if the route I'm taking is detracting from what I'm trying to achieve. Please comment on your thoughts. 

a cruel little number, I revisted after rushing to post it... Hope the changes work? 

A short piece for RLG9 

I tend to write in an over blown way, so I set myself a task to write some flash fiction with a short scene and try to give a full image, as I've seen some of the crew do so well on WW. please indulge and give me your thoughts. Sam 

I struggled with this one, I wrote it originally as just the thoughts in the head of this rather sick bugger, but then re-read the task and saw the comment to 'sit the subject next to some one', which implied to me some kind of dialogue and had to revist it. sorry it broke the 400 barrier by a bit! 

A samurai at rest 

My first piece for the beginners board, I hope it isn't too off the wall? 

from 'relationships' thoughts please me ol' lovies? 

From the 'songs of the Samurai' titled 'Lone' Presently a work in progress. 

Prompted by two lovely ladies, I'm trying to portray the knights theme with a hint of role reversal - under construction so beware! 

Another Short poem from my book of 'Songs of the Samurai' Your thoughts please everyone... 

The next instalment to entertain and to be reviewed by you lovely people. 

A yarn about realisation of aging. A work in progress, needs a little tweeking. 

The darker side of love's nature 

From the Songs of the Samurai. A spirit in dilemma, the hardest battle of them all... 

From the book of The song’s of the Samurai This one is an odd one, another moody piece still needing work, which has a 'possible' brighter note in a second verse. But I think part two detracts from the atmosphere I’m trying to create. Thoughts please on the first part and I'll upload the second half later, just so as not to confuse the ‘two parts‘. Thanks Sam  

Here we go then, another from my book of poems: 'In love of my Children' One of my favourites, it hits me when I read it.  

Another from my poem book 'The Songs of the Samurai' 

My two little boys playing in the snow  

Adrenaline’s companions in fight or flight. 

A hello to every one, I just joined the forum and have loaded this for others to mull over, please. Sam