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I wrote this on the back of a napkin in 5 minutes as a performance piece some years ago and have been chipping away at it ever since. Any suggestions? 

I do love the short poem format - so little said, but so much expressed. At least I hope so. 

My parents separated after 45 years of marriage this year and for several months were still living in the same house and answering the phone at the same time. Really not sure about this - especially not happy with penultimate line and would welcome suggestions. 

My observations on cooking supper 

My first upload in seven (!) years. A sort of love poem. I think 

just a bit of doggerel really 

I put this up on the site years ago but feels it meet's the challenge's criteria. Is this cheating? 

Sometimes I can't sleep, or have eaten too much cheese and this sort of thing is the result. 

I've written this in 2 parts becuase of the overlap of images. Basically I'm not sure which I prefer or if I need to make a choice at all. 

Two ne'er do wells come to a fitting end. This might be confusing as it's written in several tenses and uses 1st, 2nd & 3rd person narrative. Gibber! 

My first flash poetry entry...