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Does anyone else experience this? This is very short. Apologies for not posting much lately or contributing comments. I promise to have a read of all new works in the next few days. 

First chapter of my new murder mystery. This is short, you'll be glad to know. 

Finally uploaded chapter 3 - Chapter 4 to follow soon 

Chapter II – Croft Farm, October 2007 

Hardly revised 

refusing conformity 

I deliberately will not provide any background to this as I would like to know if there is enough said in the poem to express the tragedy behind it. Does it work? What does it tell you? Thanks for reading and commenting. 

Revisited version - after very useful feedback from Joanie and especially James! 

This was the chapter I had written as prompt for SJ's contribution to the challenge. She turned it into quite a different and clever piece but here is the original for anyone who is interested in seeing what the original was. 

First paragraph of a book in progress 

This is a very rough short poem I wrote this morning. I thought I'd post something as we are quite quiet at the moment... critiques, please. 

The whole of ACT I edited - there are only 2 acts and ACT II will follow shortly. Thanks for feedback on the edited version. 

This is the last act where the denouement takes place and we find whodunnit for those who were interested in what happened next. This is quite long, apologies in advance. 

Revised version