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Free spirit

by freynolds 

Posted: 08 February 2009
Word Count: 93
Summary: refusing conformity


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Rain, wind, sunshine, weather forecast.
Pylons, cables, telephone mast.
Soaps, films, news, television cast.
Audio, I-pods, MP3, sound blast.
Modern society forward, iconoclast.

Racing, speeding, motor, engine, power.
Walking, running, dancing, stalker.
Working, resting, shopping, spender.
Watching, talking, moaning, earner.
Puppet subject to control, jester.

Controls, fables, manipulates, politician.
Sensational, dirt trapping, faking, newsman.
Money grabbing, exploiting, distorting, lawman.
Abusing, disaffirming, extrapolating, taxman.
Holidaying, home improving, naïve, layman.

Smart Alec, free from controlling possession,
Thriving, creative, realistic ambition,
Success, wealth and money oblivion,
Happy, serene, focussed and vision,
Discarding controls from any direction.







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SJ Williamson at 15:25 on 22 April 2009  Report this post
Hi Fabienne

I'm sorry I can't comment on your piece from a constructive point as I really am not qualified enough to talk about technical abilities!

However, on an emotional point, this reminds me very much of the song FEAR by Ian Brown for some reason. It gives me the same feeling. I think it would work quite well as a modern piece of music.

SJx


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