viky7258

This is my first attempt at a horror type genre, so am just wondering if the scary bits are indeed scary, or if I'm not descriptive enough to conjure the correct images in peoples minds - any feedback is most welcomed. 

I added this story to WW quite awhile ago and have just tweaked it abit and added afew extra story details, it's by no means finished so you'll have to bear with me that it's so short, but any feedback on it so far would be great - thanks. 

Just a short story - hope it reads ok. 

Short piece for the sound exercise. I kinda failed the exercise already though as it's a little over 300 words and was only meant to be 200 - sorry. 

Just the beginning of a story I was toying around with. Just wanted some input on my writing really. The title was made up seconds before uploading this so I'm not even sure if I'll stick with that either. 

Just a short story - anyfeedback as always is welcomed. 

I submitted this for the Pulp.net short stories. They put that they don't give feedback, so I was hoping you guys could help out with any writing skill hints and tips you could give - thanks in advance. 

Smell exercise, little over 250 words though. 

This is a cover blurb and I was wondering what people will make of the idea - it was just one I was playing around with really. I have the scenarios, characters and everything worked out it's just putting finger to keyboard to now bring them to life if the story is good enough. Any thoughts are very welcomed. 

This is another attempt at yet another genre for me, any feedback on it is welcomed. 

Beginners group exercise 

I thought I'd do a little mixture of different peoples points of view in a little town. For each thing that happened there would be two sides to every story. Here's a snippet of the first. Any feedback as always is greatly appreciated. 

Just the start of something - I just need some feedback on it really please...