Plagious

Trying to capture mood, loss, noise and squalor in three settings. Not sure if it works. 

A little "Cold-War" or totalitarian short story. Perhaps too dated? 

Following from the metaphysical "Okula", looking to make this an anthropomorphic follow on.  

Looking for work, with apologies to TS Eliot's, The Lovesong of J Alfred Prufrock . . . and maybe Dr Seuss! 

First draft. Comments welcome. 

Etiquette on the Tube 

An early metaphysical dabble. 

A recent scientific analysis (Sunday Times. 12 February 2006) reported that “Romantic Love” was no more than a release of chemicals from the cortex, the reptilian brain connecting directly with the limbic system. Of course . . . it all makes sense . . . not! 

The end of an affair. A blend of emotive, physical and discarnate. The “cold turkey” of the separation expressed in terms of hypothermia; a flashback to more intimate times; finally, the hollowness inside and spiritual bereavement. The loss of the self, unable to find emotional solace or the understanding of “why”?  

Previously, "Anniversary" for 10th October. Second draft.