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by Plagious 

Posted: 26 June 2006
Word Count: 21
Summary: First draft. Comments welcome.

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I am nothing
am temporal

yet with spirit
sometimes enlightened

is now
my dawn or sunset?

I may yet triumph

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Account Closed at 12:04 on 30 June 2006  Report this post
I thought this was great - love the minimalism and the uncertainty. I might put another "I" at the beginning of line 2 though - but it's up to you.


Beanie Baby at 07:08 on 20 July 2006  Report this post
Love it just as it is - deep and meaningful and very thought provoking.

Plagious at 19:05 on 10 August 2006  Report this post
Anne / Jillian - thank you so much for your comments and observations! Have been "off-games" for a period, so apologies for delay responding. P

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