Plagious

Looking for work, with apologies to TS Eliot's, The Lovesong of J Alfred Prufrock . . . and maybe Dr Seuss! 

Previously, "Anniversary" for 10th October. Second draft.  

First draft. Comments welcome. 

A recent scientific analysis (Sunday Times. 12 February 2006) reported that “Romantic Love” was no more than a release of chemicals from the cortex, the reptilian brain connecting directly with the limbic system. Of course . . . it all makes sense . . . not! 

Etiquette on the Tube 

The end of an affair. A blend of emotive, physical and discarnate. The “cold turkey” of the separation expressed in terms of hypothermia; a flashback to more intimate times; finally, the hollowness inside and spiritual bereavement. The loss of the self, unable to find emotional solace or the understanding of “why”?  

A little "Cold-War" or totalitarian short story. Perhaps too dated? 

Following from the metaphysical "Okula", looking to make this an anthropomorphic follow on.  

Trying to capture mood, loss, noise and squalor in three settings. Not sure if it works. 

An early metaphysical dabble.