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Witch (2nd draft) by
Doyaldinho
Word Count: 1839 9 Comments The 2nd draft of my short story. Hopefully the lumps have been ironed out of the prose. I would like your opinions on the piece as a whole; do you think it is "good" enough? I've had a hard time getting believable reviews from people I know with most of my stuff!!!29 Jan 2010
Witch by
Doyaldinho
Word Count: 1690 8 Comments A short story set in the fantasy world I have created for my WIP novel. I decided to write this based on the past of one of its characters. Cora's past is only implicitly mentioned but I felt it interesting enough to be told here. This is also the first time that I have written anything in the 1st person, never mind attempting to write from a woman's perspective!25 Jan 2010
Untitled Chapter 4 part 1 by
Doyaldinho
Word Count: 2153 3 Comments The first half of my fourth chapter. Nit pick away!20 Jan 2010
Untitled Chapter 3 part 2 by
Doyaldinho
Word Count: 923 2 Comments The second part of my third chapter. I've been beavering away with this and done around 18,000 words so far but neglected to upload any for a while. Let me know what you think and by all means nit pick away.17 Jan 2010
Untitled Chapter 3 by
Doyaldinho
Word Count: 1990 0 Comments The next installment of my untitled novel, heeding the advice if GC and NM in reducing the amount of characters I introduce at once! I've hopefully tidied it up a bit too.18 Nov 2009
Untitled Chapter 2 by
Doyaldinho
Word Count: 942 2 Comments The second chapter of my untitled novel... (feel free to throw some titles at me by the way once you get more into the story!) Introducing t the main character Revan as a boy.11 Nov 2009
Untitled Chapter 1 by
Doyaldinho
Word Count: 2127 3 Comments This is the opening chapter to my as of yet untitled book. My original first chapter has now been moved further along the narrative and has been re-written. I will act on any criticisms once I've finished the damn thing! ;)31 Oct 2009
Untitled Prologue by
Doyaldinho
Word Count: 760 6 Comments A revised prologue to my first, as yet untitled, novel. Hopefully heeding the advice of Gaius and NMott! I will upload more chapters as I complete them. :)21 Oct 2009 Latest Activity
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