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Back cover words for Eggs, Pegs and an Elephant by
Issy
Word Count: 101 3 Comments I am struggling with the blurb for the back of the book. I am not sure if some of the long words are off-putting. 6-8 age group, and of course its the parents who will pick this up, and it will only be available to purchase online, but still.... any comments welcome.2 Dec 2016
Eggs, Pegs and an Elephant Chapter 2 by
Issy
Word Count: 1237 10 Comments Continuing the story of Edward, the elephant, and Pegs, his chicken companion on his journey to find his friend, Pieces of Eight.22 Feb 2015
Eggs, Pegs and an Elephant Chapter 4 by
Issy
Word Count: 1163 8 Comments Continuing the story, any comments appreciated. Edward is with Pegs at the end of a football match, the balloon having come down.11 Mar 2015
Milly and the Giants rewrite Ch 3 by
Issy
Word Count: 1813 0 Comments This has been toned down extensively - so much that I am thinking there is nothing much left. Is it still scary? I am also wanting Milly to begin to be thinking for herself, although it doesn't end like this.13 Jun 2011
Mr McMurdle`s Machines Chap 2 by
Issy
Word Count: 807 8 Comments I've slightly changed the end of chapter 1 to remind that Tim has an idea and so have included last few lines. All comments very welcome.20 Dec 2010
The Amberley Egg (1) Rewrite 2008 by
Issy
Word Count: 1628 8 Comments This is a book I have being trying to get to grips with for 14 years! Some wwers kindly commented a couple of years ago (thank you Leila) and am uploading the amended first chapter, as am pleased to say, am now getting into it! Any comments gratefully received.30 Oct 2008
The Christmas Room Chapter 4 by
Issy
Word Count: 2662 11 Comments This is a key chapter so am very keen to know if it works. This was also the first image that I had of this story, even before I got the idea of the room. Any comments greatly appreciated.15 Jun 2010
The Ghostly Ghastlys - 1 - Finding a Home by
Issy
Word Count: 2353 13 Comments Really sorry to be posting this again. My agent is wanting to submit this and the 3 subsequent stories to Walker's for a new series. These 4 stories will all be in one book, but each has to be 2,000 words. I am paring down like mad, but not wanting to lose the funny bits. Am 350 words over still on this first one, and any help would be appreciated to get it down!30 Apr 2007
The King`s Squashed Land - Ch 9 revised by
Issy
Word Count: 1356 6 Comments Continuing, any comments welcome17 Oct 2012
The King`s Squashed Land of Dreams Chapter 4 by
Issy
Word Count: 2217 6 Comments Chapter 4 was supposed to be quite a revealing chapter but it was coming out far too long, so the action has gone into Chapter 5. I am wondering though if this one is too quiet - though there has been a lot going on previously. Any comments welcome28 Dec 2011 Latest Activity
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