Bav Dav
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Latest Work» Order by Date » Order by Work Title6 Comments Just working through an idea. Wondered if it made anyone laugh.2 May 2005 20 Comments This is my first shot at a novel, and this is my first chapter. Any feedback gratefully recieved. It has a dodgy opening page.5 Jan 2005 11 Comments Chapter 2, let me know what you think.13 Jan 2005 5 Comments A brief chapter 3 to remind us of the main plot. I'm particularly interested in whether anyone has engaged with the character at all. B15 Jan 2005 12 Comments Chapter 4. Robert and Dan go to London and begin to see that there's a whole big scary world out there. This part of the Narrative follows on from Chapter 2 so the characters are younger. That's why the tone of it is lighter than in Chapters 1 and 3. As ever, comments appreciated.22 Jan 2005 6 Comments A one pager to turn up the heat27 Jan 2005 4 Comments Been off the writing as I prepare for the baby. Just been looking back over this and would like feeback.22 Feb 2005 0 Comments This is a song from a musical I'm working on. I've lost a bit of perspective on it so am throwing it out for feedback.6 Jun 2007 15 Comments I'm expecting our first child in 5 weeks. It got me thinking.19 Jan 2005 Latest Activity
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