Shani

This is an attempt at a monologue which is based on a longer piece of work that I'm doing but I wanted to see if I could get one aspect of that story to work as a stand alone piece 

This is piece should really be part of Its always worse for men bit I havent got round to blending them yet. You can decide whether it's the mother or daughter who deserves the title of in-law from hell 

This is an exercise I've done for a writing course where the brief was to describe a significant object for a charcater in a story so it has links to other pieces of work I've done 

These are 2 secondary characters I'm introducing in a bigger piece of work. The story is set in Palestine in 1939 and I'm trying to use these characters to mirror some of the questions that a reader might have and also to progress the story and flesh out the setting. 

This is a section from a bigger piece of work that is set in Palestine in 1939. Shoshanna and Uri are secondary characters that I am introducing with the aim of posing some of the questions that the reader might have and to hopefully progress the story 

This is a new section of truths and consequences. there are a number of non-English words in this so I'd be really grateful to know whether these work within the narrative or not. I still have to work out how to link this scene to the earlier piece I wrote. 

I think this is the start of a much bigger story and I would really welcome feedback