Jenniren

next bit???? Are you bored yet. Have read over but bound to be typos...fell free to point out. Is this too long?? What could i cut? sorry it's so long..... 

This is the first part of the story from Karens point of view. Not sure whether to put this next or continue with the Lily bit i have writen. Tell me what you think. 

Just another wee thing i found. An idea i got while working in an old fokes home, where we had a several patients that could not communicate or move or eat. So thats my setting, the end of life in a home haunted by death. 

and does it work if this comes next????? 

This is the first chapter of what is tentitivly called tea and sympathy. It is about three best friends and how their friendship is effected by their love lives and vice versa. I am a hopeless proof reader, so please feel free to point out the hundreds of typos. it has bad lanuage and is based on local humour and prenoucations in some parts. be honest! be very honest.