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Losing My Feet by
Bav Dav
Word Count: 214 0 Comments This is a song from a musical I'm working on. I've lost a bit of perspective on it so am throwing it out for feedback.6 Jun 2007
Goodbye Mr Squeak by
Bav Dav
Word Count: 325 6 Comments Just working through an idea. Wondered if it made anyone laugh.2 May 2005
His dark secret -Chapter 6, part I by
Bav Dav
Word Count: 1083 4 Comments Been off the writing as I prepare for the baby. Just been looking back over this and would like feeback.22 Feb 2005
His dark secret - Chapter 5 by
Bav Dav
Word Count: 286 6 Comments A one pager to turn up the heat27 Jan 2005
His dark secret - Chapter 4 by
Bav Dav
Word Count: 1888 12 Comments Chapter 4. Robert and Dan go to London and begin to see that there's a whole big scary world out there. This part of the Narrative follows on from Chapter 2 so the characters are younger. That's why the tone of it is lighter than in Chapters 1 and 3. As ever, comments appreciated.22 Jan 2005
What a boy should be by
Bav Dav
Word Count: 129 15 Comments I'm expecting our first child in 5 weeks. It got me thinking.19 Jan 2005
His dark secret - Chapter 3 by
Bav Dav
Word Count: 962 5 Comments A brief chapter 3 to remind us of the main plot. I'm particularly interested in whether anyone has engaged with the character at all. B15 Jan 2005
His dark secret - Chapter 2 by
Bav Dav
Word Count: 1676 11 Comments Chapter 2, let me know what you think.13 Jan 2005
His dark secret - Chapter 1 by
Bav Dav
Word Count: 1545 20 Comments This is my first shot at a novel, and this is my first chapter. Any feedback gratefully recieved. It has a dodgy opening page.5 Jan 2005 Latest Activity
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