Chestersmummy

This is a short story I'm thinking of submitting for a competition and would like your views on it. Many thank 

This is for the most recent challenge - 694 (I Think!) 

The is for the 694 challenge. 

This is another chapter in my dysfunctional twins saga. In this excerpt Anna first discovers her father's illness. This is very much a first draft and I would like to know if it flows, if it is interesting and if it makes sense. Thanks for your help 

I am hoping to kickstart this site again by posting another chapter of my dysfunctional family saga in which Anna meets her future flatmate and friend, Lucy. A friendship which eventually lead to tragedy. All comments welcome please (it may help to read my other chapters). Thanks a lot. 

For FF comp 685 

Entry for FF comp. 

Here is the entry I mean to send to fill the gap in the Flash comp. Sorry for any confusion! It must be the heat! That's my excuse anyway. 

For the current challenge 

679 challenge -976 words 

For the current challenge 

For the current challenge 

Continuing the story of Anna and Alex - partly set in the present with a flashback into the past when Anna was a child 

Another two chaps from my novel in progress. Chap 7 is told from the POV of Alec and is meant to show how jealousy is warping his mind and in Chap 8, Anna gets a pet and the seeds of tragedy are sown. 

I wrote this some time ago and thought it would be suitable for the 666 competition. 

Two more chapters of my novel The Darker Half - a story of warring twins that finally leads to tragedy. The first chapter is a dream sequence that mimics a real episode in her life and the second is where the detective's interest in her story crystallises. 

This is Chap 4 of my novel about warring twins. This excerpt is from the POV of Anna, the female twin and the heroine. It starts in present time then reverts to another flashback in Anna's life. 

For the 'food' challenge 

For challenge 648 

This is Chaps 1/2 of my novel. Chap 1 is told from the POV of Alec - the boy twin and Chap 2 is from the POV of Anna the girl twin. They are both about 11 at this stage. 

A Story of dysfunctional twins and how their childhood emnity grows until it eventually leads to tragedy. 

This is the start of the novel I am currently working on. It tells the story of twins who were born enemies and whose mutual antipathy eventually results in tragic consequences for both of them. The story unfolds in a series of flashbacks from the present time to their childhood and early life. It is told from the viewpoint of three people: Anna, the girl twin, Alec the boy twin and a detective. Present time is told in the present tense and the past on the past tense. 

For the flash fiction challenge 646 

For 646 challenge 

For Challenge 645 competition 

Entry for 643 flash fiction competition 

For this week's challenge 

Just a bit of fun 

Hi - this is Chapters 4&5 of my wartime romance novel. Frank has deserted Flora to go to war and Flora has been left to run the smallholding on her own. However, she finds that however hard she works it is just too much for her and is forced to fall back on Frank's suggestion that a POW is delegated to help her. 

Entry for flash fiction comp 19/3/2017 

For challenge 633 

I'm in with this. Found it quite a challenge! 

Sorry can't seem to extricate myself from previous challenge. Must start taking the tablets again - will think I am one of the Brontes soon. 

A Cautionary tale 

Onward and upwards - I attach another two chapters of my novel set in the 2nd WW. Flora has been deserted by her husband and now has to carry on alone. 

This is Chapter one - after the prologue. You may find it has quite a lot of 'tell' but I wanted to move the story along. 

This is a short story set in the future. An old lady who has always lived a charmed life faces reality at last. 

Just a bit of fun. Comments on content and writing please. New member so hoping for constructive help.