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I have recently rejoined and would appreciate any comments on the two short submissions with this title 

Any comments appreciated on this alt version to this title 

Our writer's group up here in the 'Hielans' have been asked to produce some short stories to be read out on local radio, any comments appreciated, but anyway, I hope to raise a smile Awrabest Ian 

I would appreciate comments on the following. I am new so hit me gently. 

Our local writer's group agreed this title for obvious reasons and also the length. My original was about 800 words before pruning. Do you think it shows? Any comments welcome. 

This is my second 'Homecoming' story. I am sure most know that Scotland is celebrating the 250th Anniversary of Robert Burns as well as golf, whisky etc, Our local writers group have been asked to contribute to an evening with this heading of stories, poems, music and song. I would appeciate any comments. 

Any comments appreciated I have 2 endings for this therefore the a 

I thought I'd try a different ending. Any comments appreciated 

Sorry for the 'Homecoming deluge' just one more to go - a variation on 3. Do you think this works or is it boring? Comments appreciated 

Comments appreciated on this short piece of nonsense. Ian 

I would appreciate any comments on the following contribution to our local writer's group 

Any comments appreciated 

Thanks for all your comments on 'The Worst Case Scenario' I thought I'd seek your views on my latest indigestion. Any thoughts appreciated and Becca, thanks for the welcome to the group