The Bar Stward

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Animation script: Memoirs of a Bar Steward SCRIPT by The Bar Stward Word Count:
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24 Nov 2013

Cartoon script: The Barstewards draft 3 by The Bar Stward Word Count: 5062
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My studio has been asked to pitch a animation to a production company in Hollywood. This is our first draft. Some of the dialogue needs improving but at the moment I would just like to know what you think of the general script. Thank you We will be making an animatic (storyboard with audio, so they won't see the script, hence if its not formatted 100% correctly, its okay) The Bar stewards is a surreal cartoon comedy about 3 lads who run a bar in a strange seaside town. 

21 Nov 2013

Cartoon script: The Barstewards draft 2 by The Bar Stward Word Count: 4446
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My studio has been asked to pitch a animation to a production company in Hollywood. This is our first draft. Some of the dialogue needs improving but at the moment I would just like to know what you think of the general script. Thank you We will be making an animatic (storyboard with audio, so they won't see the script, hence if its not formatted 100% correctly, its okay) The Bar stewards is a surreal cartoon comedy about 3 lads who run a bar in a strange seaside town. 

13 Nov 2013

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