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Allison`s Journey or Under the Palm Trees by
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Word Count: 2246 9 Comments I am posting two parts here today as I need advice please. They read pretty much the same but one is written in first person (11 chapters completed in that manner)the other only part through chapter one as I have re-written in third person. I would like to know which flows better please? If either. Both are only first draws, so need editing more yet. Be brutal I need to know. Thank you.9 Jun 2010 Latest Activity
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