mrmonkey1980

This is the first chapter of my completed novel. A unique comedy fantasy about a young vampire and slacker who finds himself the only person inbetween a powerful enemy and the throne of the capital. I've been trawling it round agents and publishers for over 2 years, but no one has been willing to back it yet, because it is so different I think. They are afraid to take a risk. I don't think it's the quality of writing, though I could be wrong and open to any suggestions. Thanks!