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Perhaps it's more descriptive prose than poetry -- I wasn't concerned w/ structure, which was something of an afterthought. I'm looking for criticism and/or reactions. It doesn't quite qualify as a love poem either. Perhaps superficial enfatuation, but real nonetheless. Mostly it's a description of the hazy memory I had from the previous night out. Maybe I'll work on it and keep it with me, in case I find her again.