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Word Count: 1637 8 Comments This is the first chapter of a novel that I have been writing for the last couple of years ! I would be grateful for some feedback...27 Apr 2003 Changeling - 2 by
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Word Count: 2100 13 Comments Second part of chapter 1. I would be grateful for honest criticism. Too wordy ? Too soppy ? Dull ? Did you make it to the end ? Thanks in advance !10 May 2003 Changeling - Chapter 1 by
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Word Count: 948 9 Comments Would appreciate comments. This is chapter 1 of novel (the prologue is archived under 'changeling').4 May 2003 Changeling - Chapter 5 by
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Word Count: 1684 16 Comments The story is becoming darker now. This is a little rough, but I would really appreciate your comments to help improve it. Many thanks, Nod15 Jul 2003 Them... by
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Word Count: 1876 11 Comments I'd be really grateful for some feedback on this piece of writing. Fourth chapter of what started as 'Changeling' and is still to find a name. Bored of it all yet ?21 Jun 2003 Latest Activity
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