noddy

The story is becoming darker now. This is a little rough, but I would really appreciate your comments to help improve it. Many thanks, Nod 

I'd be really grateful for some feedback on this piece of writing. Fourth chapter of what started as 'Changeling' and is still to find a name. Bored of it all yet ? 

Second part of chapter 1. I would be grateful for honest criticism. Too wordy ? Too soppy ? Dull ? Did you make it to the end ? Thanks in advance !