BettyH

I've re-written my book and added one of the main action scenes as a prologue. Do you think it works as Chapt 1 then begins the story of a young girl in care meeting Agir who is smuggled into the UK (and is written from her perspective). Thank you. 

A kurdish boy is separated from his family as Turkish troupes attack his village. He is smuggled to the uk and meets Alice, a young person in care. Please find attached Prologue. Will it be enough to interest possible agents? Any comments gratefully received