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A Girl by the Carousel (Rev2) by
dryyzz
Word Count: 1419 4 Comments This one has been updated, considering comments made previously. I wanted to dump a lot of verb/noun modifiers without loosing atmosphere and feel. I hope I've achieved this, let me know if the baby's gone out with the bath-water. Any other comments or suggestions, as ever, will be gratefully recieved. Darryl23 Nov 2004
In The Forest by
dryyzz
Word Count: 709 5 Comments I posted an earlier version of this up a while back. It has been fiddled with and expanded. On re-reading, it did make me smile. Hope some of you enjoy it. Also, it does make me worry about my imagination sometimes. :0) Darryl14 Oct 2004 Latest Activity
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