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Aeolus Early Will Scenes - Revisited by BigSmile Word Count: 2898
Cornerstones have told me these early scenes with Will were a bit too prosaic for a thriller and needed more tension. Iíve since reworked them, both by tweaking what happens and cutting dialogue. Do these revised scenes now work and have tension? (Note in the MS they are interspersed with other scenes)6 Oct 2008