Amym

So this is a first draft of a complete chapter. I won't explain is too much because I want to know what you think. Please be really honest..thanks. 

Okay - this will be a turning point. Katie (sis 1) has gone to Berlin to bring black-sheep Ida (sis 2) home - it's Katies wedding and she wants her there. Ida hasn't been home in years and is estranged from their Mother.