nasha17

If you love food, please comment! And otherwise, if you found it interesting enough to read to the end, please give me some criticism. 

This is not a mistake in the title, though i'm not really sure if it works. It's a day in who is life, but will that have its desired effect? I also want it to be a short story, but does it really fit the criteria? I would appreciate any comments at all! 

I have been meaning to write this short story for a long time, and having finally done it, would really appreciate any comments.