wouldiwas
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Will Isenberg
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wouldiwas
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Fiction
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Comedy, Mystery, short story
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| I am working on the manuscript of my debut novel, a dystopian crime novel. I also write short stories.
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Please read my sample and provide feedback on the following:
1) Does everything make sense?
2) Are the slang terms easy to understand within the context?
3) Does the dialogue flow well and seem real?
4) How can I make it more engaging?
19 May 2020
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