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Child of the Valley ch.2 by gavink Word Count: 2451
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Anyone who kindly commented on ch.1 may be slightly puzzled by the setting of this chapter, over a 100 years earlier than ch.1. However, it is imagined as taking place in the same constricted, provincial Welsh valley and the teenage protagonist and her father echo the characters in the futuristic setting. I haven't done much to alter this chapter since originally writing it about a year ago. Any comments, however forthright, are welcome! 

3 Oct 2013

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