Hullo,

I hope to start writing for a local Art/Music mag and have submitted some writing that I have done previously on a blog.  I was wondering if maybe someone could cast an eye over this work and give a little feedback?

Apologies in advance for the cheeky review request, I'm just new-ish to the site (I've recently become a full member), so I haven't contributed that much to the forum, but I hope to rectify this as time goes by. 

The top two reviews on stevethomps.wordpress.com are the ones I submitted. 

Many thanks in advance, 

Steve