Re: Less is more

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Re: Less is more
by Nessie at 17:32 on 13 December 2006

presumably, Pa tua is mentioned in the preceding sentence.

Therefore, to tighten it completely, whats wrong with

"He screamed."

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Re: Less is more
by Colin-M at 16:14 on 14 December 2006

If we know it's about Pa'Tua, then we know he's a "he"... so...

"Aaaarrgghhh!"

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Re: Less is more

by RJH at 13:07 on 14 September 2007

When the whole horror of his position forced itself with an agony of apprehension upon his frightened mind, Pa' Tua for a space lost his reason. He screamed aloud, and the hollow of the rocks took up his cries and hurled them back mockingly

The position was horrifying and Pa'Tua was frightened. He screamed. It echoed.

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