Thanks for explaining your comment Traveller - no I don't take offence at anything on here - I appreciate all comments of whatever nature - it is even better when people are specific - so thank you. As to whether I take any notice - well I'll think about it. lol
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So people know what sentence we are on about I'll repeat it here - (I assume you meant the one in italics below?)
The Icera Stone - a tale of how the pagan past is still alive in modern-day Dorset.
Could the consciousness of a Celtic Priestess resonate through a crystal - triggered by the coincidences of space and time?
What didn't you like about it exactly?
Andrew
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<Added>Traveller - I have given thought to your comment but I don't regard 19 words as being too long for a sentence - how would you shorten it and convey the same meaning?
<Added>Did you mean shorten the sentence in question, or shorten the Synopsis?