The hardest part being writing all the technical stuff in the first person in a way that doesn't come across as a shed load of info dump so that it all makes sense. |
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I think that's probably the hardest thing for me too. It's usually history, in my case, but the problem's the same - the 'but he wouldn't say that' moment.
The only thing you can do is pat yourself on the back for actually knowing that info-dump is a Bad Idea. Most aspiring writers and not a few published ones haven't quite grasped that.
Emma
<Added>Having said that, I find that in the end I don't need to put in all sorts of info that I thought I did. The information shapes how I write it - makes the situations and experiences seem real - but then most of the actual sentences of info can be cut, and readers don't seem to mind at all, or even notice. If I get it right, I think they're convinced by the real-ness, and don't question 'would that really happen?'. So I don't actually need to explain that yes it would and why.