"I don't understand why everyone in technique is so bloody uptight!!" Casey shouted. "In fact....i've been meaning to tell you for a while... you want to all TAKE A F------- CHILL PILL!!!"

Emma felt really hurt. "Casey," she said, sadly "i thought we were 'friends'?"

Dee was getting angry. "You ungrateful Bitch!" she snarled, "after all the help we've given you. You shouldn't count your chicken 'til their hatched! You may still need our help!"

"Yeh, right on! As you can see from this, i now write perfectly, thanks to my new self-editing book. Ciao, you losers..."!!!!


Do you think i've included enough technical mistakes in this, to show that i am gradually learning something?

Casey

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great idea, Dee:)