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  • Ellipsis vs the dash
    by Hilary L at 17:03 on 13 May 2006
    I'd really like the board's opinion on this please. I've noticed some editors are now using a dash in place of an ellipsis to indicate a unfinished thought or sentence. Is this a general practice I've just never noticed before or is it new? I'm a great one for ellipsis but I think the dash looks quite snazzy. Any opinions please?
  • Re: Ellipsis vs the dash
    by Katerina at 17:42 on 13 May 2006
    I've noticed people using the dash instead too, I think it must be a new way of doing it.

    Personally, I like the ellipsis, but would want to do it the correct way, so maybe someone out there can tell us which is the correct one to use now.
  • Re: Ellipsis vs the dash
    by EmmaD at 17:54 on 13 May 2006
    Usual correct practice is that a dash is used when speech is interrupted, and an ellipsis when it trails off into silence:

    I grabbed him by the throat. 'Don't you dare talk to me like - '
    'Shut up, you bastard!' He hit me across the mouth.


    She said, 'I don't know if you think we should...'
    I looked at her, but she didn't seem to know what to say next.


    Dashes are properly used - as they were in the old days - in pairs, rather like parentheses (otherwise known as brackets).

    On the other hand - well, it's a looser modern thing, isn't it? Using dashes for this kind of thing - the kind of hesitation in dialogue - the kind which isn't grammatical enough for a comma. I got endlessly picked up for doing this too much by my MPhil tutor. He was quite right. It's lazy, and too non-specific.

    Emma
  • Re: Ellipsis vs the dash
    by Hilary L at 21:02 on 13 May 2006
    Thanks Emma, that clears it up nicely. I just didn't want to be doing something clearly old fashioned by using the ellipsis, especially as I use it too much anyway.

    Hilary