lynley says it in her conclusion... 'does it work?' creative writing either does
or it doesnae
no rules
just effective and ineffective
but i hear you already
we need to know them rules before we can ...

i really like the the figure of speech 'sanity and common sense.' it reminds me of a marx brother sketch:

Lawyer: 'We need to invoke the sanity clause.'

The Italian one: 'Ah no believe ina sanity clause.'

Michael

Hey buddy your post is very informative. I also don't know what exactly is head-hopping.