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  • Re: Could I just check the reader can know about things the mc doesn`t?
    by helen black at 16:23 on 03 October 2009
    Hi there.
    I think in this instance I'd stick with the one POV - not because to change is breaking a 'rule' but because in this instance it's not right. It clunks because the reader is getting on very well thank you with the previous POV, in fact the reader ( well this one) wants more.
    Hope this helps.
    HB x
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