I recently received feedback on my book from an agent who has given me much food for thought.

One of the main points was the fact that even though the book is written entirely in first person from the viewpoint of the main character there are a number of different voices representing different aspects of his personality, different moods. The question is does this seem to work? Does it work well?

Can anyone else offer up any books that are written in a similar fashion. I've uploaded a couple more chapters to hopefully demonstrate the difference.

Thoughts anyone?

Geoff