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  • Contractions
    by darkstar at 08:58 on 18 July 2004
    I'm currently editing my novel and I've realised that as a matter of course I always contract did not to didn't, would not to wouldn't etc etc. This is partly because this is how I write, but also because I regularly read my work aloud and to spell out the uncontracted forms sounds stilted and artificial.

    However, my novel is a historical piece set in the mid 19thc and I am aware that such contractions were not then present in formal speech or writing. While I have made some effort to adjust the dialogue of those characters who would never have made contractions, I am not attempting to write a pastiche, and I am wondering about the narrative. Should I eliminate all contractions from it? *thinks of effect on word count and blenches*

    I'd welcome everyone's advice because this is driving me bananas.

    Cas
  • Re: Contractions
    by Dee at 12:03 on 18 July 2004
    This is a tricky one, Cas. I’m not sure I’m qualified to answer as I don’t write historical fiction. My instinct would be to use contractions in the narrative but not in the dialogue – or only sparingly.

    Only other suggestion I can make is to study a few published novel set in the same era and see how they do it.

    Good luck.

    Dee.
  • Re: Contractions
    by darkstar at 15:45 on 18 July 2004
    Thanks, Dee.

    My inclincation is to leave the contractions in the narrative too. I have looked at a few historical novels, and it seems to vary, depending on the style of the writer.

    It's something I need to think about, because I need to be consistent. *sigh*

    Cas