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she unwillingly gives in to his wife, Jeannie’s, plea for help |
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she unwillingly gives in to his wife's, Jeannie’s, plea for help |
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she unwillingly gives in to his wife Jeannie’s plea for help |
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For what it's worth, I'd say the first is definitely wrong because,if you remove the parenthical ',Jeannie's,', 'wife plea for help' doesn't make sense.
I'd favour the third: 'wife Jeannie's plea for help' where the two nouns are in apposition. As a negative example, you wouldn't say 'Rudolf's the red-nosed reindeer's nose'. The second on the other hand seems to read a little awkwardly even if it may be strictly correct.
Chris
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The sentence is a bit complicated, I would suggest simplifying it.
eg:
Unwillingly, she gives in to his wife's plea for help.
If Jeannie is a minor character then it's probably not worth naming her.
Or, if she's a major character then use:
Unwillingly, she gives in to Jeannie's plea for help.
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oops, I mean cluttered, not complicated.
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I'd go for the third, as 'his wife' is being used as an adjectival phrase so you don't really need the comma.
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I agree with Daisy. The third is correct.
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Yes, I'd agree with the third one.
Emma
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Thanks everyone. I'll go with the third.