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  • Which is right? The first sounds right when spoken - but doesn`t look right on the page.
    by Steerpike`s sister at 18:44 on 09 January 2008
    she unwillingly gives in to his wife, Jeannie’s, plea for help


    she unwillingly gives in to his wife's, Jeannie’s, plea for help


    she unwillingly gives in to his wife Jeannie’s plea for help



  • Re: Which is right? The first sounds right when spoken - but doesn`t look right on the page.
    by chris2 at 19:59 on 09 January 2008
    For what it's worth, I'd say the first is definitely wrong because,if you remove the parenthical ',Jeannie's,', 'wife plea for help' doesn't make sense.

    I'd favour the third: 'wife Jeannie's plea for help' where the two nouns are in apposition. As a negative example, you wouldn't say 'Rudolf's the red-nosed reindeer's nose'. The second on the other hand seems to read a little awkwardly even if it may be strictly correct.

    Chris
  • Re: Which is right? The first sounds right when spoken - but doesn`t look right on the page.
    by NMott at 20:47 on 09 January 2008
    The sentence is a bit complicated, I would suggest simplifying it.
    eg:

    Unwillingly, she gives in to his wife's plea for help.

    If Jeannie is a minor character then it's probably not worth naming her.
    Or, if she's a major character then use:

    Unwillingly, she gives in to Jeannie's plea for help.




    <Added>

    oops, I mean cluttered, not complicated.
  • Re: Which is right? The first sounds right when spoken - but doesn`t look right on the page.
    by daisy2004 at 20:56 on 09 January 2008
    I'd go for the third, as 'his wife' is being used as an adjectival phrase so you don't really need the comma.
  • Re: Which is right? The first sounds right when spoken - but doesn`t look right on the page.
    by Luisa at 23:13 on 09 January 2008
    I agree with Daisy. The third is correct.
  • Re: Which is right? The first sounds right when spoken - but doesn`t look right on the page.
    by EmmaD at 00:18 on 10 January 2008
    Yes, I'd agree with the third one.

    Emma
  • Re: Which is right? The first sounds right when spoken - but doesn`t look right on the page.
    by Steerpike`s sister at 10:48 on 10 January 2008
    Thanks everyone. I'll go with the third.