Having just posted part of a chapter from the book I am working on, I would appreciate comments on the content and writing technique.
smiles across the miles,
Linda B

Linda, you are far more likely to get feedback on your work by uploading it to a group of which you are a member. I see you have joined two prose groups, but that your piece is not uploaded in either of them.

If you upload the piece in one of those groups you will then be very likely to get feedback. I know Women's Fiction is very active, so that might be your best bet.

Good luck.

Deb