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  • Re: To feel of...?
    by RT104 at 20:16 on 01 June 2007
    Thanks v much both of you! I'll stick a pin in tomorrow!

    R x
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  • Re: To feel of...?
    by chris2 at 15:53 on 05 June 2007
    I like 'the feel of' and see why you want to use it.

    How about making Shelly the subject of the whole sentence and avoiding the double 'had':

    She found, as she always had before, the feel of sanctuary in Kate's enveloping warmth, but still Shelly could not quite let go of her own tension.

    Chris
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