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  • Re: Tenses
    by EmmaD at 17:02 on 18 April 2007
    Actually ‘was’ appeared twice in the original version.


    So it did! Sorry you're having a bad day, Dee.

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  • Re: Tenses
    by NMott at 17:17 on 18 April 2007
    Sorry you're having a bad day, Dee. I shouldn't have been flippent, just ignore me. Hope you're back on form soon.

    Sorry, deb, I just meant that, as a reader, this makes me think the scene is contemporary, ie. 2007; whereas that makes me think it is set sometime in the past - last year, last decade, last century...


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  • Re: Tenses
    by debac at 10:25 on 19 April 2007
    OIC. Thanks Naomi - interesting.

    I'm sorry you were having a bad day yesterday, Dee, and that I didn't twig and say so before! Hope you feel better today.

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