I was having dificulty envisaging it from the pov of a peeping perv. |
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I can see you. I can see you as you move the flimsy curtains aside and stretch in front of the window, your body sinewy in the cool morning light. I see your flat stomach and the curve of your unfettered breast as you touch your toes and turn your bottom to the sky, the blood rushing to your head.
Deb (who can
do perv, but isn't one)
<Added>I do wish you could withdraw msgs. I am a total idiot. Yes, I KNOW that isn't in 2nd person. Just rattled it off for fun without engaging brain!
<Added>But you could do something very similar in 2nd p.