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  • Re: You see this thread and you think you can help
    by NMott at 11:22 on 27 February 2007
    Sorry, Geoff, I meant to come back to it.
    After reading deb's reply I just thought I'd have a play with 2nd p using your scenario of an amnesiac, as I was having dificulty envisaging it from the pov of a peeping perv.

    Good synopsis, by the way.

    - NaomiM
  • Re: You see this thread and you think you can help
    by debac at 15:26 on 28 February 2007
    I was having dificulty envisaging it from the pov of a peeping perv.

    I can see you. I can see you as you move the flimsy curtains aside and stretch in front of the window, your body sinewy in the cool morning light. I see your flat stomach and the curve of your unfettered breast as you touch your toes and turn your bottom to the sky, the blood rushing to your head.

    Deb (who can do perv, but isn't one)

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    I do wish you could withdraw msgs. I am a total idiot. Yes, I KNOW that isn't in 2nd person. Just rattled it off for fun without engaging brain!

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    But you could do something very similar in 2nd p.
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