Would it look too strange to suddenly go into third person for the secondary character, or would it confuse the reader to have two first person POVs? |
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It would be clearer to me if the secondary one was in third person, but the risk is that s/he feels slightly more distant from the reader, just by contrast with the int-the-head feel of 1st person. Two first person PoVs is fine too, but you'd have to make it very, very clear what was happening, and someone reading without their full attention might be still be momentarily confused. It helps if they have very strongly characterised and different voices.
Emma