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  • Query Letter - follow up book
    by eve26 at 18:56 on 20 November 2011
    Me again, honestly you'll be sick of the sight of me soon!

    Just a quicky. Is it worth mentioning on a query letter that I am currently working on a follow up to the submitted novel? Or does this sound a bit of a cliche?

    Many thanks
    Eve
  • Re: Query Letter - follow up book
    by Jem at 20:29 on 20 November 2011
    No. I think it's good. No agent wants a one trick pony.
  • Re: Query Letter - follow up book
    by CarolS at 21:26 on 20 November 2011
    Do you mean follow-up as in a sequel or just the next book? If the latter, I think they'd just assume that's what you're doing. I don't think it would harm t say it, but I don't think it would add anything. If it is a sequel then I'd say it'd be a good idea to mention it.

  • Re: Query Letter - follow up book
    by EmmaD at 22:10 on 20 November 2011
    I think mention it, briefly. As Jem says, they want to know you've got more than one novel inside you, but 99.9% of their interest is in this novel.

    If it IS a sequel, I'd go very carefully. Agents see a lot of novels which are actually the first half of a novel, because the full story came in at 250,000 words, so the writer's just chopped it in half (when actually they should have been ruthless with the whole thing). So you'd want to make it very clear that this novel was written to stand on its own, it's just that you have some other ideas for the characters' later story...
  • Re: Query Letter - follow up book
    by BeckyC at 14:42 on 21 November 2011
    Yes, I agree you should be a bit more circumspect if it's a sequel. For one thing, I keep being told that agents find it hard enough to sell one book, let alone a series...

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    Not meaning you shouldn't mention it, but yes, make sure to emphasise your first one is self-contained, too.
  • Re: Query Letter - follow up book
    by funnyvalentine at 09:26 on 22 November 2011
    Hi Eve26

    I stuck a two line outline of the next book at the bottom of my synopsis - if they read that far - but as Emma says, this book is a stand alone one.