I just submitted my novel to an independant publisher and part of the submission guidlines was to ask for an example of the 'blurb' that you would put on the back cover. I found it a tricky but fun exercise that really makes you look at your book in a new way!

You can see what I came up with on my blog. I would be really grateful for your opinions!

Cheers!!

Stu
http://tollesburytimeforever.blogspot.com/2011/11/blurb-i-had-to-write-for-recent.html

There is a synopsis and outline group here Stu, you would get great feedback if you were to post it there. These WW forums are secure and private - people are wary of posting comments else where, especially on private blogs run by members we haven't got to know though sharing work/pain/joy/despair etc.

Ben Yezir

I agree with Ben, though I did have a quick peek. It runs pretty well, but you the last word is spelt wrong ('two' instead of 'too', which does reduce its impact somewhat)

Bugger! Thanks for pointing that out! Oh Mr Wine you have failed me again!!

Stu
http://tollesburytimeforever.blogspot.com/