Hi,

I've finished my first children fiction and have submitted first three chapters to some agents. It would take time when their reply come running into my inbox. My work deals scenarios of courtroom, quite different from human's court. Despite all creatures enjoy equal right, Animals still file cases against human beings for their cruelty.

Before writing I had read some actual transcripts of the cases and wrote accordingly. However I'd so happy if any lawyer here have a look on the chapters( though it's not much) that contains that courtroom scenarios.

It's my humble request If you time.


Thanks,


Michael

There's a lot of boring stuff that goes on in court cases, so maybe read a few crime novels featuring court cases - eg, by John Grisham - so you know which are the more interesting bits and concentrate on those.


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also PD James